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RE: Witherford - Chapter 1 - Introductions
Awesome!! I like the dialogue. Great moments with Chris's dialogue and that awkward part where Iris laughs at his surname. I look forward to reading more.
Awesome!! I like the dialogue. Great moments with Chris's dialogue and that awkward part where Iris laughs at his surname. I look forward to reading more.
It just fits so perfectly!
I couldn't help myself.
Thanks for participating, this story is just beginning.