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RE: Part One, Section Two: "Breaking and Entering"
You are the King of dialogue ... I was grinning the whole time reading this, the interactions between the characters are so compelling
You are the King of dialogue ... I was grinning the whole time reading this, the interactions between the characters are so compelling
Thanks. They're fun. Warren and Phoebe never stop talking. Next chapter - get ready for contrast :)