Run: 50 words

in #undefined6 years ago

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Her hesitation broke. Bare feet struck blades of grass in a rhythm as old as the earth flying by beneath her. Auburn hair whipped the sky in defiance of the gravity that had ever dared tame it. Her rekindled spirit consumed her fear leaving only an intense hunger for freedom.

Picture is from Artur Roman and is free for personal and commercial use. It can be found here:
https://www.pexels.com/photo/agriculture-beautiful-clouds-cloudy-sky-539711/

This is my first ever post, and I thought I'd give this fun looking writing competition a whirl! It can be found here:
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@jayna/new-50-word-challenge-and-the-week-in-review

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Welcome to Steemit I am glad you're on here! Look forward to helping you grow and look forward to seeing your creativity flourish here. Nice write-up too! So much description for just 50 words

Thanks bit, and thanks for introducing me to steemit, I'm really excited to explore here!

Hi @blueteddy. Welcome to Steemit! Thanks for participating in #fiftywords. I'm sorry I haven't responded. I have to recover my @jayna account, and currently am posting as @jaynas-minime. (I described the situation here.)

I love this line of your story:

Her rekindled spirit consumed her fear leaving only an intense hunger for freedom.

Well done!

Thank you for your kind words and the welcome! Hope you can get everything worked out with your account.

Great work here! I can see the strong and defiant pose in my head, and feel the wind.

Welcome to steemit! Nothing better than starting out with a 50 word story! :)

Thank you very much!

Some lovely imagery and prose in this one @blueteddy

Thank you @cizzo :D

Very, very nice. I love the freedom theme. Excellent metaphors.

Welcome to Steemit, @blueteddy! :)

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@creatr

Thank you for the compliment and the warm welcome, I really enjoyed the freedom theme in yours as well!

Sounds like a metaphor for you landing in a place where you can share your writing. Glad to have you here <3

yeah maybe just a bit :p

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