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RE: The Cockroach Rules: Finish the Story Contest #45
- Blerrie -
Silent taps radiating
from the blue walls
in this porta-potty
of Infernal Heck now!
Cockroach swarms
cockroach attacks
cockroach overcome
cockroach triumphant
Now begins the great
and very blerrie event
of rippin'-n-tearin' now
within this porta-potty
So let's smell red rum,
let's live the red rum,
let's decorate red rum,
let's become red rum!
Now this was one cockroach infested entry, this really hit home on the science of crapology, cockroaches, horror, the Tortillas getting senselessly and slap-tastically abused... wait, where am I going with this? Anyways, beneath the obscenities of horror qua Nature is a deeply invested tale that's basically wants to say one thing: don't fuck with the roaches. Yet a more obscene version would be basically: "Let us not deceive ourselves by our victories over nature. She avenges for each such victory" to quote Friedrich Engels. For the assuming and hungry Tres-Culos (us) had his breakfast too early and then took upon the cockroaches; for which they resisted and avenged the humiliating loss they experienced. And in global contemporary times with Climate Change said to be non-stop, there's no denying that Nature will treat Humanity as her equals finally and give back to Humanity what she thought of their shitty (pun intended and not intended) ideas of making subordinate all things nonhuman... But we shall see.
Comradely love,
Comrade Prof. Dr. Victor
Red rum, red rum---conscious reference to the mayhem in The Shining?
As usual, your poetry is sonorous and fluid.
As for your analysis of our conflict with nature--here's what I have to say.
Keep up the good fight, Comrade, because people with less noble intentions will not abandon their advantage easily.
Thank you for your kind words!
Indeed, but I was also referencing the song called Red Rum, but I can't find it nor remember the lyrics other than the singing of "Red rum~ Reeeeeed Rum" as the lyrics. I only heard it thrice in my life, so can't remember the lyrics all to well...
Surreal gifs, 'twas a true way to respond to this~
Aye, same to yah mój towarzysz.
Proszę!!!!~ <3