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RE: Overdrive: a short fiction story [Part II]

in #freewrite6 years ago

"Pag lumingon ka, akin ka!" sabi ng faceless whitelady. 😂

Grabe to! This is the very reason why I don't do long distance drive at night kasi what if may makita aqng mumo. Haha

Pero mas grabe yung writing style mo dito Jazz, on both parts actually. The vivid and descriptive language you used added depth to the story! It feels like I was there too. Busog na busog ang aking human senses, lalo na my imagination. Great job, as always.

And yes, isusulat ko na rin iyong akin. Pero ang ganda ng pagka narrate mo. Na intimidate ako. 😅😂

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Haha, ginamit ko ang line mo. Sakto e lol. Nilapatan ko ng Tagalog ang akda. Para ngang may kulang kapag wala. Salamat at nasiyahan ka sa narration. Ginawa kong medyo casual ang estilo na para bang bonfire storytelling experience.

Baka hindi ko kayanin yun isusulat mo, pero ready na akong ma-praning haha.

Wahahahaha! Gustong gusto ko talaga ang Tagalog version Jazz. Di ko alam kung kaya ko gayahin, pero nakaka engganyo rin talagang gawin. 😄

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