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RE: Five minute free write - Artichoke
That was really awesome stuff :-) I like the analogy of the artichoke to the bomb/grenade. You seem to capture a lot of activity in a short piece, the trench is actually alive :-)
Thanks! Wrote this just before going to bed so wasn't sure if it made sense, hehe.
Made perfect sense to me sir :-) A WW1 trench warfare scene down to a T.
Had an episode of I think it was Twilight Zone in my head...or at least that kinda vibe :)