The dark night of the cemetery
It was a dark night and the noise of the strong winds sounded in the ears as if some unseen force or power was slapping the face, and its menacing echo was tearing the eardrums. Always in such weather and with such terrible nights even Ali's soul trembled. He was very afraid, more fear was instilled in Ali by his friends.
They did not care at all about the pranks he used to frighten Ali even though Ali forbade him, sometimes with ghosts, sometimes with witches, sometimes with scary stories. And there was a time when Ali began to consider such things as reality. But at the same time he was trying to control his fear too.
Ali's mother used to explain to him a lot that he should not take such things to heart, these ghosts are just the fear of our mind, there is nothing like that in reality. His mother was very worried about Ali. But she did not know the fact that it was all a conspiracy of Ali's friends, who deliberately intimidated Ali and later enjoyed his fear.
Seeing his mother's worry, Ali stopped telling her about his fear and started behaving normally in front of her.
One day, Ali's friends insist him to spend the night with them. Despite Ali's prohibition, they all took permission from Ali's mother. All friends including Ali gathered at Hamza's house. They all got together but now they didn't know what to do because they were all feeling bored.
Suddenly Hamza and Shehryar got an idea to tease Ali. And they waited for him to sleep and when Ali fell asleep, Hamza and Shehryar told their idea to the other four friends. Abdullah and Waleed forbade that they should not play such a terrible joke with Ali and they were also angry with Hamza and Shehryar that they should at least take care of their friendship. But on the contrary, Aamir and Khalid thought of supporting Hamza and Shehryar. And they also agreed to support Hamza and Shehryar to end the boredom.
Ali was the owner of a weak heart, he appeared to be very brave on the outside, but inside he was very scared, he did not even share his feelings with anyone. Ali had gone to sleep early, fearing that his friends would not frighten him further. And when Ali slept, he slept so deeply that he was not even aware of his side.
Hamza and the rest of his friends forced Abdullah and Waleed to join in their dirty joke. Taking advantage of the darkness of the night, they picked up Ali's cot and started walking towards the graveyard.
A friend started making a movie that he would later show and tease Ali. But what did they know that time might have approved something else. Now it was not Ali's turn to be afraid.
On one side of the graveyard, they placed the cot on which Ali was sleeping, and at the same time played the recorder with scary sounds on the mobile phone. And threw water on Ali's mouth, which caused Ali to wake up. At first, Ali did not understand where he was and what was happening to him.
But as soon as he saw the terrible scene before him, the night was dark and the light of the moon was negligible. But it was so sure that he could see the graves near him in the terrible darkness of the night.
At first he thought he was dreaming. But when he realized that it was not a dream but a reality, he was so frightened that he could not even hear the jeers and laughter of his friends and fainted.
At first all the friends laughed a lot but as they started trying to bring him back to consciousness, they all became worried as to why Ali was not conscious. Then a friend started crying out of fear, a friend started reciting Quranic verses. Everyone was very scared.
Now Hamza and his friends began to realize their foolish prank and began to think that they should not have done this to Ali. Despite many efforts, they could not bring Ali to consciousness.
But suddenly Ali gets up and screams, so Khalid faints and everyone else gets scared.
Now it was Ali's turn to laugh and all the others were looking at him as if a ghost had entered Ali.
Ali shouts so loudly and says that
How did you like my joke?
You use plot twists very well. An excellent story. You gave the clue that triggers the why of the story, at the very last moment. Which keeps the reader's interest until the end.
Glad to read that you liked my story.
I like the story more!
Thank God☺️
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I would like to give myself 9 marks for this post.
Although the writing is long, but when my pen moves, the story becomes itself
And I didn't have to work hard for this story because one such incident happened to my ears.
We should not play with human mind. The story combines horror, revenge and humor in a unique way, where a simple prank takes an unexpected turn.
I hope you like my story.
If you don't work hard for it, it's a freewrite. 👍
I agree we should not play with the human mind, I call ita dirty trick not a prank and heartless friends shoukd not behave like this, and it reminds me of a life of pain my aunt suffered from (staying single because of this) after the neighbour boys pulled a chair away as she intended to sit down. They lived happily ever after never aware of how their prank ruined a girl's life.
I am sorry to hear. A lot of prayers for your aunt.
I try to write the story in such a way that if someone reads my story who intends to make a joke in this way, they will understand the pain that the victim feels along with the joke.
Our joke aside but should not hurt anyone's sentiments.
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tulang ekornya rusak permanen akibat terjatuh dan dia juga menderita kanker tulang.
Apa yang kita anggap sebagai lelucon bisa menjadi bumerang.
Is she ok. Cancer can be cured.
My grandmother also had bone cancer but she could not survive. It is very sad to hear about your aunt. After all, how can anyone sleep peacefully by ruining someone's life.
In a way this doesn't feel like horror. It leaves me with a sad feeling. Sad because these aren't friends.
A good story about why it's not good to make stupid jokes and maybe a warning that we should choose our friends accordingly, because I got the impression that these people, were not really his friends. Good that he also showed what he could do.
Thank you very much for your kind comments.
Indeed, best friends in life are a blessing from God, but friends who are selfish should be kept away from your life. Because such friends make you addicted to mental stress.
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