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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #27 (English)

in #haikucontest6 years ago (edited)

Haiku lovers, with my love I also leave my entrance to the contest:

Once it was new.

Also a boat gets old
and falls, sinking.

After my publication I keep thinking about the idea of ​​the boat as the cradle of mermaids.
I'm going to share them

The disused boat

sinks with grace,
cradle of sirens.

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I love your second haiku! Rethinking about it has been a good choice.