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RE: Deadly but preventable diseases part 1: Pneumonia

in #health7 years ago (edited)

Some of the words that were being used seem awkward. For example, I'm not sure if Torax X ray is a proper term for chest x-ray or x-ray of the thorax cavity. You don't need to use some kind of bombastic word to make your post looks good. You should pay attention to whether your reader will understand your statement or not.

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Thanks for the suggestion, I will take it into account to improve. regards