Amazing poem! Definitely a reminder to stay strong and move forward from your past rather than letting it consume you.
Just a suggestion, but you should break your poem lines down more so it's easier to keep the rhythm. :)
Amazing poem! Definitely a reminder to stay strong and move forward from your past rather than letting it consume you.
Just a suggestion, but you should break your poem lines down more so it's easier to keep the rhythm. :)
Thanks, keciah will definitely do that... am kinda always in a multitasking mode most times. will definately have to take my time with it next time.