Interesting poem It wastes a cynicism that shakes and makes one think. The end of it is well achieved, the speech is poetic, but the message clear: hope hurts because there is no way of salvation. The images reveal an intensity of negative emotion
Excellent work with writing, poet.
So good to see you here, poet. This is my last poem on 7 stages of grief. The next one will be about renewal but, also rife with negative sentiments. :).