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in #love • 7 years ago

Love is so great
Can turn hate into love
Your love is amazing
You turn hate into love

You might as well taste
Feel what I feel
Should I reveal what I feel
That I really love and love
Oh night tell my darling to him

Can you feel the same, feel what I feel
Should I reveal what I feel
That I really love (love) and my dear (dear)
Oh night (oh night) convey my darling to him

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     7 years ago 

    Love is something unimaginable, it's results are so magnificent

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       7 years ago 

      Thanks for sharing, it`s an amazing post

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         7 years ago 

        Nice rhythm. Really appealing poem, I like it. There is a bit too much repetition, but that might just be me being picky, haha. Regardless, well done, and thank you for sharing!

        PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)

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