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RE: an Oakland glimpse / watching in transit from one world to the next
The city sounds like overstimulation, or maybe that is me projecting my feelings onto your writing. Some people really like the stimulation of it all. This was really a beautiful story, despite a lot of ugly images mixed in with the pretty or the just neutral. That is good writing I think - making beauty out of everything.
I really like that last picture.
i get overstimulated a lot and certainly was navigating that...