My new novel lost in a galaxy

Ive been writing a novel and my inspiration has been lost in space and i need some constructive criticism so here is chapter one

We were just going off the omega in the exvasular 2 to the new expected habitable planet tendet 4.1 then my family Moira, Joel, Ellie, john, my wife Emily, and me Atticus started to ponder what will we find and what will it do. We were just getting out of the galaxy hervois and then out if nowhere we all felt a bad smash and I checked the status of the ship and I yelled “ Hey all the ships were out do you have confirmation on what hit us” moira replied “ No who would have caused this” then this is when it all started. We started to approach a planet we didnt know which one it was it was strange but looked of mars but it had water! The ship started reaching high speed while falling into the planet ivertseud at speeds of three thousand miles per hour and then with a loud crash we landed and embedded our ship into the ground destroying everything in the ship. We all were bruised but I had broken ribs and Joel broke his arm we had ellie try an patch him up but it was to badly damaged “damn, this is probably going to lead to cutting my arm off.” Said joel. Ellie sighed “yes” I was shocked but even more curious about what crashed into us. We me, emily, and john went to go explore but left all the security systems on to protect ellie and joel. The gravity was so severe we could barely walk this was crazy i thought we might be the first to find alien life and even better a planet habitable for humans! But then i remembered what is the consequence going to be to find aliens or will we all just die here alone and lost in a galaxy.