Steemit OpenMic Week 71 - Among Humans (original song)steemCreated with Sketch.

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This is a song I made about not feeling human sometimes. It's 4:30am here in New York, and I was trying not to be too loud because I have neighbors haha. Anyway, I hope you like it :)

"Among Humans" by @QuanahJayHicks

In all our searching, we have found you
In a lonely system by far removed
Among the humans... so different from them
A toiled journey to be where you've been
We've cried for you
We've cried for you
We've traveled light-years through space and time
Searched scattered ruins where light did not shine
Far passed the wreckage, a curious find
You among humans, but now it's time
We've come for you
We've come for you
We've cried for you
We've cried for you

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Interesting chord changes.

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oh my god this is so beautiful song..... your voice is so beautiful ... really this is so heart touch song.... thanks for share your so beautiful heart touch song ...

this gives me chills - reminds me of a sort of Mad World Gary Jules style and even the movie Donnie Darko that the song is on. love love love!

(im a new yorker too!)

Thanks for checking it out! :)
Nice to meet you btw. New York? Maybe we'll make some music together sometime! :D

nice to e-meet you as well! i live in brooklyn, although I'm currently having an extended stay in the UK. will be back in a month or two tho (hopefully when the weather is better;p)
and would love to collaborate!

feel free to check out my soundcloud: www.soundcloud.com/breannafayemusic
i don't have many songs recorded but I'm working on it! :)

Nice, I'll check it out! This is my studio version of this song btw:

so nice! its amazing to hear a production as well as the live version :) also sidenot - what font is that youre using!? i absolutely LOVE it!

Thanks! It's the same font used for some of the "Aliens" movie posters :D

omg hahah brilliant! looks so different in this context!:)

Yeahh I love that font :) it seemed suitable for the lyric style of the song too

Cool song and performance, brother! Nice!

Thanks for the support man!! :D