ADSactly Poetry : Lucid Lyrics Designed to Expand Minds (Part 23)
Hello Steemians! The ADSactly Poetry : Lucid Lyrics Designed to Expand Minds series is designed to be a sort of platform for sharing some of my greatest works with @adsactly readers.
Many of the verses I’ve shared and continue to share were written in collaboration with a friend of mine.
Others were written as solo projects and some made their way to the recording booth.
I’ve got another special piece for @adsactly readers today, this is a short verse which is designed for readers to ‘sing-a-long’
The background music I wrote it to has been embedded below. I dare you to give it a shot!
I really hope readers enjoy these and let me know what they think about them.
My Spirit
My spirit is old I feel it.
Its the key to the soul.
Simply possessing a spirit or soul ain't enough constantly working on mine when the going gets tough.
Never went so far as to sell it that'd mean i'd sold-out that my spirit and soul had rolled out leaving the body behind.
And I'd guess in a way that's the point of this rhyme.
In goodness can find divine and raise these bars of light.
Cause we can look at it as a game and we can even choose to play it. Which way does the soul want to go?
Don't worry it'll let you know that's for sure.
Sometimes the spirit and the mind just don't align.
Overcome it all with that gut feeling that says everything's gonna be alright.
I hope so, got faith in my soul to guide my way home and put me in the arms of lost loved ones.
This one's for you if ya hearin' me dad, grandma and grandpas.
So take pause and check in with your spirit don't have to listen very hard to hear it and only those that violate it will have to fear it.
So that's my spirit, the same spirit as yours. Representing kindness in life and we'll let it just take its course.
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No matter what, I'd very much like to know your thoughts and feelings about these, what you liked or didn't like, I'd love to hear your opinion either way!
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One thing is the time we live and another is the instants in which we feel alive. Sometimes from so much feeling, living, we feel that our souls have been for many years on this planet. Maturity is not a matter of numbers but of life, of laughing a lot, dreaming a lot, feeling a lot. The one who lives daily with intensity, will surely live longer than the one who lives by the wayside, by the wayside, by the moments. Greetings, @zentalk.
absolutely!
The text you give us this time I appreciate more coherently in your saying. You present a feeling with regard to the spirit or soul (for me they would be the same) very interesting. Also remember that the Greeks used the word psique to refer to the soul, and we use it to speak of the mind. so that between mind and soul there is a certain identity, you might say. Perhaps the key is in the phrase that uses archetypal psychology, of Jungian root, "to make soul". Greetings, @zentalk.
Thanks a lot @josemalavem. Happy I hit a home run on this one with you and that it stirred something! The spirit or soul is something we must try to recognize and take care of as best we can, i truly believe it is the only truth in this illusion.
@adsactly Heya, So beautifully written.. Thanks for sharing your talent... I gurrantee all those who read these lines fron soul have got a mark of these lines on soul.... Thanks keep it up =)
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