The words remind me of a song by Cliff Richards
If I said I loved you
What would you say?
If I said I needed you
Would it frighten you away?
If I said I loved you
And I wanted you to be
My one and only lover
Eternally.
Not the same, but the feel. Your poem could be put to similar style of music.
I see what you mean - I know that song and yes it could be interpreted in that style :)