Bad Habits Of Passion

dobartim (83)in #poetry • 7 years ago

We dream big ships with wealth, we go to the path of material happiness. Your body draws the attention of the mind through the magnet of magical passions, emotions touch the stars in the dreams of illusion. Habits create dopamine while time passes in infinite cycles of karma.
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We are small stars that shine under the rain, your eyes bring fire to the palm of my love. We pass through storms of life, we make decisions for our children in the oasis of sand. Through the desert pass the giants of knowledge, in the golden age of materialism.
We are happy in problems, passing gifts and moments of glory - this is the magic of deception that tests us for passing on to a higher level of spiritual development. We have become strong in our weaknesses - Passion has replaced love in sexual rituals.
Habit counts money instead of kisses and embraces, energy passes through the clouds of foggy thoughts while we sit on a pedestal of ignorance. Love is the eternal ideal of immortal souls that sail on the wings of your power - Love is the most beautiful habit of life.
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Original poetry written by @dobartim

#esoteric #love #life #soulpoetry

7 years ago in #poetry by dobartim (83)

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wajahatsardar (63) 7 years ago

I think this poetry is for your wife. heheh nice work thanks for sharing my friend

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moarafatshow (53) 7 years ago

Lol 😂

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blessedben (49) 7 years ago

'Love is the most beautiful habit of life."
I think i like that your poetry does not follow the conventional style of writing poetry. Uniqueness is what makes each one of us perfect in our own ways. And you're surely perfect in the poetry you write. Am always looking forward to your next work.
I am totally in love with the last line of your poem and thats what am going to talk about.
Yes! Love is really the most beautiful habit of life, because only with love can subsequent good works be possible. Learn the habit of love and every other thing follows. Thank you for your good work.

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abudabor (31) 7 years ago

Nice , i up voted , re teem and followed
i would to be strong like you.

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apiprincz (52) 7 years ago

great poetry, you are definitely my mentor in poetry because I have being inspired by some of your recent works to write some poem myself. If you are less busy. Please try to check some of my poem. Thanks sir

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michaelwrites (54) 7 years ago

Love truly is the aisle of many things.
the heartbeat of two ignorant souls,
the peace of many inarticulate borders.
we are the truce announced on love.

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