On The Limits Of Tenderness

in #poetry7 years ago
  • We stand on images of artistic visions, the future spills new ideas in the minds of beginners. All the changes are painful except your touch, each step is programmed with our works. The smile comes from happy lips, the kisses spread the smell of introvert relations.

  • Limited numbers jump into a breakdown of mathematics, we make up new paths of stars on the feet of your feelings. We are not ideal in the world of perfect illusions, we are a movement that plays on the instruments of science. I see new concepts in the doctrines of logic, joy has made a new leap of emotions.

  • Money is the law in the world of fools, there is a better justice arrangement above the creation process. Energy makes new moments for celebrity ideas, launch a weapon of love in a war against negative thoughts. We sing beautiful songs in a rough warehouse of vision, romantic enthusiasm changes our reality.

  • Gentle kisses have awakened the boy in my dreams, you are the unlimited power of beauty that creates our oasis of love. Time is gentle in the hands of truth, show me your secrets and wisdom. Pearls floating on the shores of diamonds, the ideals find the way to a sincere heart.


Original poetry written by @dobartim
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Wow wow wow. How wise and Romantic are thy stanza. Captivating and mind breaking

I'm glad you like it

I love it

Pearls floating on the shores of diamonds, the ideals find the way to a sincere heart.

This is truth. When sincere energy is put out into the universe it attracts those with sincere intention, and those with the impurities not found on the diamond shores will fade into the distance. The pearls will remain on the shore.

Awesome comment

Something very real after I read this post. each line has meaning and meaning that we can digest in the future. thank you @dobartim

You are welcome, thank you for your nice words

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So nice and wonderful poetry, thanks for your sharing to us...

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Nice poetry with powerfull words. I am so sorry to tell what i think..your picture showing girls or woman with no clothes. I just little know about the art, but i think the art not always about woman and his body. I am so sorry, this just what i think

Of course, this is like material and spiritual. We have material body and spiritual words like dualism

¡Bellisima! amigo poeta @dobartim, lanza un arma de amor en una guerra contra los pensamientos negativos, seria maravilloso si todos usaramos el amor como arma, tenemos que ser positivos y creer en nosotros mismo.

Hola amigo, have a nice and successful day

beautiful poetry , very romantic, very beautiful picture, steemit school very extraordinary, thank you for sharing @dobartim.😊

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I am touched by your poetry.It felt like i am reading something which i can really corellate to..keep writing followed you and upvoted you.

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Beautiful images and poetry! "We are not ideal in the world of perfect illusions, we are a movement that plays on the instruments of science." Lovely!