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RE: Rhyming Diary January 11: A night walk through the woods
This was pretty cool man. You easily made me see what you were writing about, which is good. Would've switched "to" to "for" on the 8th line. Other than that I really liked it man.
Thanks, comments like this are very helpful! English is not my first language and those little mistakes slip in, ruining it for everyone who speaks English well.