@mrblu thank you for sharing this poem and the emotions and feelings you express through it. Love can be a tricky thing, never the same, and always changing or different.

My favorite parts of the poem are at the beginning; i think they are the strongest expressions and best combination of words. The later half of the poem got confusing and longer distracted. I didn't understand the images after the first two stanzas.

The first two stanzas were great because they danced this line between opposites, how the speaker confesses that he sometimes likes the way distance makes him lover her more. I also enjoyed how the first stanza was about how distance sharpens and strengthens love.

Thanks again for sharing.