Our Collective Mind (and all the Souls)

in #poetry8 years ago

Some of us will make history
Together we will make all of it
Some will run out of battery
and batteries will be unnecessary

And all the shit that's important now
will be forgotten - and lost in the past somehow

What will remain is the human soul
and our collective mind
will survive the time
so that we can find
what is hidden behind what we know

Some of us will make history
A lot of people already did
History has not ended yet
because as we go we develop it

And this big trip that we're all on
it will continue into what we don't know

And our souls
Will remain

// I will continue posting poetry now and then. This is the lyrics for a song I'm working on with @uglycasanova and @resus (wonderful guys). I feel these words fitted in here, under the #poetry tag. I hope they resonated with your soul and fucked with your mind in a soft, gentle way. Anyway, thanks for reading.

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Photo: @jonasontheroof. Artist: unknown. Coatepec, VZ, Mexico

I hope more people will get the finger out of their inner poets ass and start sharing too.
Here's more (from me and others): https://steemit.com/writing/@uglycasanova/a-poem-i-wrote-in-my-days-of-substance-abuse-and-depression
https://steemit.com/usual/@isteemit/what-is-life
https://steemit.com/inspirational/@ericvancewalton/four-thousand-breaths
https://steemit.com/escape/@jonasontheroof/sleep-paralysis-ego-trap-what
https://steemit.com/poetry/@jonasontheroof/beep-beep-check-this-is-one-calling //

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Hi! This post has a Flesch-Kincaid grade level of 9.5 and reading ease of 68%. This puts the writing level on par with Michael Crichton and Mitt Romney.