You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: First Posting of Original Poetry X2View the full contextmasterpiz (48)in #poetry • 8 years ago Good work. Elaborate and musical
You're so right my friend! The first poem Is written in a way that I actually read it In a drunken Jim Morrison voice, of The Doors.
It actually has the rollie musical rhythm within lines.
Perfect!
I wish I know it's tune!
😊