You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Unbound ( original poem )View the full contextserejandmyself (70)in #poetry • 10 years ago (edited)good flow, very musical, but im a bit lost for the meaning ) Upped
It is about supporting those that are losing hope.
So I failed :)
I will try harder for my next. It gives me the opportunity to get better in writing.
practice makes perfect.
thank you so much for criticizing my work.
<3