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RE: Love Like A Candle

in #poetry • 9 years ago

I think this is really good, great use of alliteration, has a good pace.
I like your use of onomatopoeia as well, this has a very strong visual composition, I think you write really well :)

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     9 years ago 

    Thanks for the compliment but i guess it needs a little bit more of polishing to make it more catchy for the readers.

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