with the No I wanted to make sure that there was a large emphasis place on the fact that there was no information in my head.
I appreciate you stopping by to help me out, I also didn't enjoy the third stanza, but I wanted to give a clear indication that my normal sources of poetry had run dry. I haven't worked with syllable distribution but I will look into it.

I wrote this early yesterday morning, and it didn't come out as well as I hope, I rewrote the poem several times before I was able to find words that stuck...

Again I am really grateful for the help :D