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RE: A New Body Experience (Serial Novel Pt. 3)
I continue to be impressed by the human touch you add to each of these installments. The characters feel complex and flawed, uncertain but always pressing forward. Well done!
Thanks michaias! I'm glad you're enjoying it, though I must admit I'm getting a little stuck with the writing. I've got half of the next chapter done, but for the life of me I can't figure out the way forward... So it sounds like my characters are a little better at moving forward than I am!