Hello @suesa! In school, we are taught about academic writing. What stood out to me was that even when you have a thesis for a side, you still need to provide evidence that challenges it from opposing angles. In running experiments, having only one part of a hypothesis or argument doesn't hold unless you can see the whole picture. I enjoyed that you wanted to instill that hypotheses can be wrong.

The only things you can gain from a failed experiment is experience and learning. By being wrong, you can grow and learn what's right.

Mahalo!
@shello