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RE: Suaoki 1080P Car DVR - DVR is suitable for your car

in #steemhunt5 years ago (edited)

Ok, I was going to drop you a BOMB... and then I realized you are a new user... =) so, for the benefit of the doubt I will just show you what I would say to you if you had already 10 hunts like these. Please see this as experienced information for you to improve! =) I will be very happy if you can continue doing hunts... great hunts, because I really value this platform.


This would be what I would say if you were not a recent user

The moment, I see someone starting with the following sentence... "This is very useful" I give up! honestly... it's not up to you to decide whatever is useful for anyone... people that buy the product are. Plus, saying something is useful, does not give any whatsoever information about why! It's a car mirror for god sake! Why is better than a normal mirror? that's what you need to focus... "think... !"

Some sentences make no sense... especially if you make them alone... I use a trick that usually works great on checking if how or what you are saying makes sense or feels right... An example... Just by taking parts of your words...

Everything will be easy
Really? everything? will my life be easier? even if I am dying? or whatever? No... has no detail... so makes no sense.

so everything runs smoothly
Again... everything? please be specific... otherwise, everything you say has no value.

Also, you have some grammatical errors, so please run a spell checker.


Did I sound like very harsh? Well, if you were protecting something you like, would you not do the same?

Cheers :)