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RE: Laura Ebert - Part 1 - Insanity

in #story6 years ago

Up until the last moment when I saw the tag I thought it was a real story. I thought you simply changed her name and that it really happened to you. You are a great story teller. Building the tension from the early age up to the moment that 'you' knew what you were doing and your curiosity would not leave you alone.

That part of the story where 'you' met her was really creepy and scary. I so hoped she would not follow you back home.. and then that dream.. she would even steal your sleep! I was feeling sorry for you.. of course until I saw the tag :D Oh, you made me laugh at the end :)

Now I'm curious how this story will develop and at least now I know that it's not real :)

Well done! Thank you for sharing and congratulations on your curie vote!

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Thanks for the congratulations! To be honest, at least the weird lady going around talking to herself and the setting are actually real. The rest is purely fictional though.