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RE: Hennerietta Isabella | A Love Story, "Alive in Grave" | Episode 6

in #story7 years ago

Great progression and development. I like the accurate description of the social structure of the time. And you have beautifully portrayed the tenderness of maturing love 😊👍

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I am trying to work little more over portraying the scenes . Trying to learn from the mistakes i made in the past. I hope it will get noticed. :)

of course. Your writing is getting freer and covering more details in description. We all learn from past mistakes :)

Thanks nehab

my pleasure :)