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RE: Retribution: Evil Happens-Penance Follows (an original novel)

in #story • 9 years ago (edited)

Quite an interesting start bill. I'm already wondering what is gonna happen next. Being frank with you though, you've got 8 mistakes that I counted in there. I've followed you though and need to know what happened to Maria.

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