Hi, the story is nice. I had a look at your profile, and you write well; I have one suggestion for you in general; it would be nice if you don't comment 'original works' , and second, if you work a bit on the format of this post, put 1 space between paragraphs (where you didn't put), then I will resteem your post. One final suggestion: It would be beneficial for you if you leave some meaningful comments on the posts of others.
Let me know when you make these changes, and I will resteem your post. Just reply to this comment. Thanks.
I've done some of the things you've done. I do hope it's enough.
My other posts have paragraph breaks. The reason why there wasn't any in my previous posts was because I copy-paste the text from the MS Word manuscript.