Thanks for sharing your early work! I have a friend that's written a script for a movie, or most of it. I've been bugging him to start taping it, with his friends as actors and cameramen. I think he fears it might turn out like this :P

Well of course it will! It probably will be worse in technical quality and acting! But the point is it's gotta start somewhere. A good script can overcome plenty of amateur technical and acting issues. Just look at Clerks.