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RE: When It Rains... Contributed by @Olawalium

in #writing6 years ago

The rhythm of this poetry is so superb I couldn't even stop singing it with the powerful rhyme scheme adopted and the choice of words which is simple and convey the message well enough. (Abab) rhymes all through.

Wow, I could remember vividly when I used to go out in the play with just my pant to explore nature in its uniqueness and simplicity, I couldn't even care whether I'm going to catch cold later in the day due to exposing myself in the falling rain. I always anticipate when it will rain soon, up till now, I still have the feeling as I have toppled the past once again.