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RE: New Story - again written exclusively on Steemit - WiP - Bouncer Part 20

in #writing7 years ago

This is another interesting story of zack. It's a really great opportunity for joe from zack. It's a really good conversation between zack and joe. Joe 's advice for zack is really nice about viktor.
And i really enjoy the character of taylor in this story. And the dialog of zack " close your mouth, brother, you have seen women before, i am sure." is really very funny and lovely.
I really enjoy the reading of this story. It's a really great fiction of your creative mind.