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RE: I am. (Short story.)

in #writing6 years ago

This is such a lovely story and I love your writing style.

It's incredible how babies go through all of these "crazy" emotions and we hardly even notice, while this is purely fiction, I feel that it could truly be an interpretation of a baby's emotions when they finally arrive this new world, until they finally feel that touch and hear that voice which they seem connected to.

Isn't it just amazing how they feel that connection and warmth even though they supposedly know very little?

I love your story.

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Thank you for reading and for your kind comment. <3