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RE: Cause of death | Story

in #writing6 years ago

This is such a sad story. Where is this world going when people are afraid to talk to their families and share their issues/problems because they know that they would start gossiping? I don't know if this is a real story but even if not there are issues mentioned that are happening in families every day - distrust, gossiping, not wishing well, judging , etc..

The way you write is very catchy. The dialogues are interesting and feel real. I can imagine how desperate is poor Cristina. She loves her sister but can't do anything to help her. And at the end she is dying.. People generally don't know about AIDS/HIV and I agree with you saying that they automatically think about promiscuity. This is just not true.

Thank you for spreading awareness and I hope people will understand how poisonous can relationship be, even in the family.

Have a great weekend!