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RE: [Original Novel] Pressure 2: Dark Corners, Part 5
90 seconds. More like 70 now. James frantically scrambled to the moon pool and, bracing for the cold, dove through it. Burning pain, convulsions, as horrid as before but now also seeming tedious, as his focus was entirely on getting through that hatch.
You write action scenes with real talent. Actual, real talent. Describing the sensations and actions like that!
Thank you for sharing.