A Broken Heart & An Empty Pack of Cigarettes

in #writing8 years ago

"A Broken Heart & An Empty Pack of Cigarettes"

 So I've spent all damn night... 
Trying to say this right.... 
Trying to get the right words 
To Write this wrong..... 

With you it's always a fight 
You think your always right 
Well times are changin 
And you might just be in for a surprise... 

I was a fool, you were a bitch 
Fell in love, and I woke up with a twitch 
A broken heart and an empty pack of cigarettes 
I should have known it was too good to be true.... 

Been sitting here all day... 
Trying to get out this stain 
You left on my brain and 
find a way back from your insanity 

Now I don't know wrong from right 
Can't stop trying to fight this 
I can't seem to find anyway out.... 
Maybe it's wrong tonight.....but it feels so right. 
Let's forget about tomorrow and just be here now... 

So I was a fool.....you were a bitch 
I fell in love, you gave me a twitch 
A broken heart and an empty pack of cigarettes 
So many times I wanted to quit ...before it ever got to this 
But I was a fool----you were a bitch.....I fell in love, 

Woke up with a twitch, a broken heart and an empty pack of Cigarettes
You put my broken heart in your empty pack of cigarettes...
(c)Jason Cueto

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Thank you so much for reading! Much appreciated.

Thanks for sharing. This could be a song too:)

Thanks for checking it out. Originally it was conceptualized as a song. Unfortunately my guitar skills arent quie up to par. But theres a possibility in the future for sure. Appreciate the feedback

You're welcome. It's great either way.

Great post. Exciting content.

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