Steemit Challenge s28wk3: When Hope Returns

The first week of spring had barely begun. Ronny found himself slowing his steps near the blooming tree. Once it was a dead tree. But now its branches have many delicate pink blossoms. Hope grows like spring he thought uninvited but unstoppable.

Back at the office life resumed its normal routine. The quiet noise of routine that he had once run. But now felt strangely comforting. But it was Nina who softened the sharp edges of his days.

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She joined their team as a designer. She was quiet but warm. She made the most stressful meetings feel lighter. Her laughter did not burst out like Sameera’s. Ronny noticed the little things. The way she tucked her hair behind her ear when confused. The way she hummed when working. The way she always offered half her lunch to anyone who forgot theirs.

But he kept a safe distance. Love for him was a storm. He was not sure he could survive it again.

One afternoon as they worked late on a project Nina broke the quiet.

“Ronny can I ask you something?”

He nodded without looking up.

“Why do you always look like you are holding your breath?”

He froze. It was a strange question. . It was strange because it was true.

I went through something he said carefully. Something I thought I would not recover from. Nina simply nodded and said that Spring still comes even if winter forgets to leave.

Her words were almost the same as the gardener’s. Ronny felt something warm stir in his chest.

Over the next few weeks they found themselves sharing quiet moments. They shared coffee breaks, small jokes, walks to the elevator. Ronny did not try to name anything. He simply let the days unfold.

But one evening as they left the office he saw Nina’s smile fade when she answered a call. Her face tensed and her shoulders stiffened. When she hung up she hesitated before speaking.

That was the hospital, she said. “My mother’s condition… it’s getting worse.”

Ronny felt a familiar grief, helplessness and the weight of life’s unpredictability. But this time he did not run from it.

“Do you need someone to go with you?” he asked quietly.

To his surprise she nodded. “Yes. I think I do.”

The hospital smelled of antiseptic and fear. Nina’s mother lay pale but peaceful. Ronny stood beside Nina as she held her mother’s hand. He did not speak and he simply stayed. And for Nina that was enough.

Over the next days Ronny visited the hospital with her. They shared silent elevator rides. They shared cups of vending machine coffee and the heavy stillness of waiting rooms. Their connection grew not in grand gestures but in the quiet endurance of reality, pain, hope, and everything in between.

One morning while waiting outside the ICU Nina leaned her head on his shoulder.

“I am scared,” she whispered.

“So am I,” Ronny admitted.

“But you are still here.”

“So are you.”

In that moment, he realized love was not the storm he had feared. It was the shelter he had forgotten.

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When Nina’s mother passed away peacefully. Three days later Ronny held Nina as she cried not to fix her grief but to share its weight. She clung to him. Because he did not promise sunshine. He simply stayed through the rain.

Weeks later as they walked through the same park where Ronny had first seen the blooming tree Nina paused.

“Do you believe in second springs?” she asked softly.

Ronny looked at the blossoms above them fragile, temporary, but breathtaking.

“I think,” he said, taking her hand for the first time “that hope grows back exactly when we stop expecting it.”

Nina smiled through her tears and Ronny felt something bloom inside him again which was slow, gentle, but real.

Because spring always returns.
Even to hearts that once believed they were barren.

I want to invite @karobiamin71, @joslud, @cymolan.

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Week-3 : Hope Grows Like Spring

 
Hello @akmalshakir, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.8/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness3.9/3Okay
Presentation0.9/1Okay
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.5/10
FeedbackYou have a nice and touchy story that complements the theme well but I am surprised why you have used first person as well third dialogues for your protagonist which has loosened your grip on the story.Example > I went through something he said carefully. Something I thought I would not recover from. Nina simply nodded and said that Spring still comes even if winter forgets to leave.
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I really enjoy your writing. Wishing you the best and continued success. Your job is really beautiful. ♥️

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