Steemit Challenge s28wk3: When Hope Returns

While collaborating on projects Ronny found himself eager to see Nina. They would get coffee, talk about books, and exchange life stories. Ronny was captivated by her warmth and understanding. Nina also had experienced her sadness yet she remained a true romantic at heart.

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One night while they were up late to finish a project, Nina revealed her tale of grief and strength, Ronny listened feeling a bond he hadn't felt in years, He told his history and Nina listened kindly, her eyes twinkling with tears.

As the weeks passed, their connection became stronger. They would stroll around the city during lunch hours sharing laughter and discovering places, Ronny noticed he was developing feelings for Nina, though he was unwilling to admit it.

One day Sam, a coworker began showing increased interest in Nina. Ronny experienced a surge of jealousy recognizing he didn’t want to see her go to another. Suddenly, it struck him powerfully – he was deeply in love with Nina.

And most times Sam would usually get lunch for Nina whenever he stopped by the restaurant close to the office. It was now clear to Ronny that Sam had an interest in Nina but Nina only saw Sam as a friend.

After Ronny had noticed that Sam continued to bring lunch for Nina on a faithful day, he decided to ask Nina about her relationship with Sam. Nina answered, saying,

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"We're just friends, hope you don't mind."

Ronny then smiled gently and said,

"Just curious".

Some didn't stop at just bringing lunch for Nina, but also getting her clothes. One evening, during working hours Ronny discovered that Sam had bought the dress Nina was wearing that day.

When Ronny and Nina we're having a conversations at the park, she explained that some had both are some clothes, Ronny was furious and said,

"he now buys clothes for you"

Nina exclaimed and said;

" he just bought it for me as a gift that's all hope you comfortable way cuz you're my closest friend"

Ronny says I'm okay, am just being concerned. Ronny, in his heart, finally concluded that he loved Nina.

That night while walking in the park Ronny looked at Nina Said "There's something I've wanted to share with you. You've transformed me Nina. You've provided me with a reason to love and trust, in love once more. You make me whole. I can't picture my life without you."

She beamed.

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"I've been longing to hear that Ronny. I've fallen for you well."

Their mouths touched in a kiss while the sun disappeared behind the horizon. Ronny realized he had discovered his refuge, his companion, and his closest friend in Nina.

While they strolled holding hands, Ronny remarked,

"I believed love was destiny's game, yet you've proven it to be a decision. You captured my heart. I'm thankful you did."

Ronny realized he had discovered his eternal place – within her embrace in her soul and, through the affection they held.

Years had passed as they both relaxed on each other's shoulders right on the balcony, glancing through the city's sparkling lights. Ronny looked at Nina and said, You help me have belief, and in love once more." Ronny had finally found his eternal refuge - in her embrace, her heart, and the love they had together.

Their love story was one of slow-burning embers, a flame that grew stronger with each passing day. They'd found their way back to each other, and their love would last a lifetime.

Cc:

@dove11
@josepha
@ninapenda
@solperez
@sduttaskitchen

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Week-3 : Hope Grows Like Spring

 
Hello @chiagoziee, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.8/5
Originality & Uniqueness2.8/3
Presentation0.9/1
My observation0.9/1
Total9.4/10
FeedbackYou have gone way off the contest prompt. I missed Ronny, but it seems like a story with a love triangle where Sam and Rina took the major chunk.
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@dove11

Thanks for the review sir, I will improve and be more specific, making the protagonist outshine antagonist