Steemit Challenge s28wk3: When Hope Returns.

in #writing-s28wk310 days ago (edited)

Bismillahir Rahmanir Raheem

Assalamualaikum Everyone.
This is @sohag10 from #Bangladesh.

The city seemed to be rushing towards a different horizon, while Roni was sitting still on the balcony chair. The few months of vacation after the breakup did not give her any rest, on the contrary, Roni was even more tired during the vacation.

People's voices were lost, the phone screen was off, why was Roni having a different time now. Looking at the ceiling, she often thinks - is love a cruel game of fate? Is there only pain and suffering in love!

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Suddenly, one morning, she went to the park out of boredom. There she saw a gardener, who cutting off the branches of a dead tree in the wind. Roni suddenly asked the owner, why is this tree working so hard behind it? What is the reason for the pain behind it?

The gardener smiled and said - the end only happens when the season does not return..

This thought seemed to bring a blind thrill to Rani's mind. Since then, Roni has developed a habit of coming to the park. She comes to the park regularly and keeps looking at the same tree on the same path.

As time goes by, Roni's feelings slowly change. The smell of wet soil, the warmth of the sun in the air, the laughter of children, all these bring us back to a new chapter of life. He feels the desire to start a new chapter.

Spring returns. The first buds appear on that tree. Roni's mind is filled with joy. Roni seems to be enjoying a different kind of joyful moment now.

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Just then, Roni returns to his workplace and meets Nina. Nina was silent but there was a kind of stillness in her eyes. As if she had something to say but she couldn't say it. One day, Nina came to the coffee line in the canteen and said to Roni, "Why don't you smile?" I always look serious and I want to know the reason behind it.

Then, Roni said, "What if I smile and something breaks again?

Time passed. Suddenly, in the afternoon, they went for a walk in the park. While they were walking, they stood under that tree and said, "You know, human minds are also like trees. If they are cut at the time, they dry up. When people get hurt in the wrong place, that hurt gets embedded in their hearts. People can't forget that hurt.

Roni slowly said, "I'll never fall in love again."

Nina was silent for a while and said, “Okay. But don’t give up hope. People live with hope. People love to realize people’s hopes and desires in their dreams for the future.

A few days later, Nina told them that she had been to another city and would be moving there. There were no promises, no demands, no regrets. On the day of her farewell, Nina left a small piece of paper under the tree.

With Nina gone, Roni was alone again. But this time loneliness could not consume him. This time he did not break down. This time, Roni seemed to have built himself up in a new way.

Suddenly one day, Roni opened the paper and started reading. It was written on the paper:

“Love holds people together, and hope keeps them alive.” People want to fulfill their hopes, that’s why they keep their hopes alive. So that they can fulfill them.

The tree was full of flowers at that time. Roni understood that Nina did not come as love, but as spring. So that a new life could be energized. Why new Life begins here.

Ronnie laughs, "I'm not alone anymore. The seasons are changing inside me now."

I invite @mahmud552 @abdulmomin @shadow04 to participate in the competition. I hope you will participate in the competition and make it more beautiful.

God is Hafez.

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Saludos apreciado amigo. Excelente narrativa. Siempre habrán personas y sucesos que nos cambian la vida para bien o para mil. Es nuestra decisión seguir el sendero correcto. Bendiciones para ti

Muchas gracias. Estos incidentes también ocurren en la vida real. Te deseo lo mejor.

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Week-3 : Hope Grows Like Spring

 
Hello @sohag10, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-2. We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria provided below.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.5/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness2.8/3Okay
Presentation0.8/1-
My observation0.8/1-
Total8.9/10
FeedbackI guess you need to read your story one more time because you have changed the sex of Ronny by using she for him and misspelled his name at different points.Example > Suddenly, one morning, she went to the park out of boredom. There she saw a gardener,
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¡Saludos amigo!🤗

Siempre digo que los árboles son una especie de humanos y, los humanos de árboles. Por ello, de alguna manera u otra tenemos grandes similitudes e incluso, la conexión es auténtica.

Te deseo mucho éxito en la dinámica... Un fuerte abrazo💚

Yes, Tree is our best friend. Thank you so much for your beautiful comment.