"Steemit Challenge s28wk6: Unexpected Chat's True Twist"

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Anthony returned home. The music was humming in his mind. He kept thinking about Tina. The unexpected meeting with Tina, the rustling sound of her folded clothes, the innocent smile on her face, and the beautiful dimple on her cheek while she laughed, all seemed like a miracle. But everything had become real, and this reality would blossom even more in the coming week.
Antony's heart woke up happy in the morning with that arrival.

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I didn't realize how the week had passed. I didn't even realize how much time had passed at night. All night long, the two of them exchanged various opinions on various topics. The chatting continued with funny issues, likes, and dislikes of the two people.
Anthony wondered if he had ever been so happy in his life. He couldn't remember. He had been known as a hesitant person all his life, but after the unexpected meeting with Tina, a great change had come in him. He could see a touch of confidence in himself. Anthony was eagerly waiting for next week.
The week had ended. Anthony sat down to meet Tina at the pre-arranged place. But Anthony noticed that there was a shadow of worry on Tina's face. The smile and brightness that were there before were missing.
Tina happily welcomed Anthony. They ordered food. But somewhere a tune had been cut off until last night, Tina happily welcomed Anthony. But somewhere a tune had been cut off.
Anthony asked Tina-
Tina, are you okay?
Tina smiled a little- Yes, everything is fine.
Anthony noticed Tina looking at her phone repeatedly, after a while, she went to the phone settings and worked for a while.
Antoni asked again -
Are you in any trouble?
Now Tina opened her mouth-
Anthony, the meeting between the two of us last week was no coincidence. It was part of our plan.
Antoni's eyes widened. He could feel the one thing he would hear from Tina's mouth. He decided to listen patiently to everything about why Tina was unfaithful to his feelings.
Tina started to say-

I work in an organization where my job is to trap different people, build sweet relationships with them, and put them in danger. That's why I get paid.
But it's also true that after talking to you, I've changed a lot. Your simplicity, your faith in me, have helped me change. I have to prepare and send reports about my clients every day. But I haven't sent a single report in the last week. I even stopped the app through which I was being monitored some time ago.
Now I know that danger will come to me at any moment. My superiors will not leave me. Even then, I won't trap you. You leave now and change your SIM.
For a long time, Anthony listened to Tina in silence. Why did it seem like Tina was telling the truth? Because he had heard of such incidents before.
Now, if he got out of here safely and changed his SIM, he would be saved from the trappers.
He asked Tina to keep the rules-
What will you do now?
Tina replied-
I don't know, but I know that if someone betrays this organization, they will be found and killed wherever they run away.
Now I don't know what my fate is.

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But you can be sure that I will not pass on any of your information.
Anthony was silent for a while. He couldn't figure out what to say.
At one point, he made a firm decision and said to Tina-
If you agree, then we can deal with this problem together. A friend of mine works in the intelligence office. I can take his help. Only if you agree to stay with me until the end.
Tina's eyes lit up. Still, she wanted to know -
Why would you risk your life for me?
Now Anthony held Tina's hands tightly-
I fell in love with you at first sight. Now your danger means my danger. We will deal with this problem together.
Tina's face was filled with happiness - she nodded her head in the affirmative. All fear had gone from her mind. She turned off the mobile phone in her hand and threw it in the dustbin. Proof of the loss of contact with them.
They sat together at the lunch table and ate their food. The taste of the food seemed to have increased several times. They talked for a long time in the joy of their hearts. In the meantime, Antony made an appointment with his police friend. After eating, the two of them left the restaurant with a sense of peace.

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Week-1 : Unexpected Chat's True Twist

 
Hello @shahid76, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-6. I truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on my evaluation criteria is provided below:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.7/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness2.8/3-
Presentation0.9/1-
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.3/10
FeedbackYou said they met on a plan by Tina but as per the prompt Antony invited her for coffee. You did not make it clear what was Tina's assignment or who was she reporting to? The name of the protagonist is Antony and not Anthony.
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