Steemit Challenge s28wk6: Unexpected Chat's True Twist

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Anthony was staring how Tina was leaving and every step took his new friend away into the darkness of this lonely dark night. Tina reached her car, Anthony was begging to all the powers of the world to make her to look back to him just before she disappears in her her. Very last moment she indeed turned around, she smiled and sent him a blown kiss. Got made a gesture of catching up the kiss and put his hand on his heart, showing that it is caught now in his heart. For Anthony it was clear it was a beginning of wonderful romantic relationship.
- Tina
When we look at the situation from Tina’s side, she was walking away from Anthony, she was very nervous and anxious. She knew that Anthony is still there and watching her leaving. She knew that she has to turn back if she wants to get Anthony under her influence.
“Just one more time to turn and smile and pretend that I fall in love with him”, said Tina to herself and gathered her all power and made it her last part in t his game.
Of course, he was very predictable and did what she was expected.
Finally she got into the car and made a deep sign of relief, she closed her eyes and whispered:
“Now I can be only me, an ordinary person with my own real emotions and not the played one”
She switched on a motor and drove home.
Once she arrived home, she went down to basement that was her “headquarter”, she switched on the light and that showed a room with a wall that was covered with multiple pieces of paper with some writings, random photos and maps. They all were connected with threads of few different colours. For someone who just entered the room it was just chaotic wall but not for Tina, she now reached her final point and there was a photo of Anthony where all the threads lead.
Tina’s eyes lightened up and it was completely different glance, she was very concentrated and looked like she is a chess player who is ready for final “checkmate”.
She then picked up the phone and called a Detective Turner:
“Hi Jim, our mouse is now in mousetrap, we will get him on Friday evening, I am having the last dinner with him.”
Det. Turner answered:
“Damn it Tina, I warned you to stay away from him, he is dangerous! You are violating the order of the Captain, to stay away from him!”
Tina answered:
“It is my case and it was my sister who he killed! I am his avenger and nobody can stop me. I told you so that you can be there for me but also to stop me from killing him.”
Det. Turner swore but agreed.
- Mysterious Date
It was Friday, Tina and Anthony both were in her car on the way to her place for a dinner. Once they arrived to a very small village that Anthony never new of its existence, she then said that she is going to tie his eyes closed and there is a surprise waiting for him.
Anthony happily agreed, he was in love and did not feel anything else, no danger, no betrayal only love.
They went down the stairs and then stopped.
Tina then said: “You can release the tie!”
Anthony opened his eyes but froze for seconds, he was staring on the wall, the same wall full of the pieces of hints, some photos and thread. He then noticed his photo and a thread between his photo and of a young women. It took couple of minutes and he recalled that girl…
It was five years ago when he was driving home, he was drunk and he knew he should not drive but it was very late and he wanted to return the car before his father realized that. While driving he heard his smart phone ringing, he wanted to answer but dropped it, it was still ringing and it was his father, he had to answer. He looked at street and it was empty, he then leaned to passenger seat and picked up his phone from floor. In that moment he heard a dull dump sound. He looked around but did not see anything. He went out of car only then he noticed that there was a young girl a jogger who was hit by his car. He was scarred, he was sixteen and drunk, his father will “kill” him. He looked around again, there is nobody. He decided to drive away.
At this moment when he saw her photo the whole memory came back as a flashback he felt himself like that evening, scared, he did not know what to do.
He looked at Tina, she said:
“Do you remember her, Anthony? She was my sister and you left her to die.” “I am your avenger what do you think I should do?”...
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Hello @wuddi, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-6. I truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on my evaluation criteria is provided below:
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Thank you for the assessment of my story. By the way ny nephew's name is Anthony, so I did not pay much attention to my writing, probably unconsciously used my nephew's spelling :)
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