WORD POETRY CHALLENGE #19: JOURNEY | THE JOURNEY TO SEVENTH HEAVEN

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THE JOURNEY TO SEVENTH HEAVEN
by: @onahdegreat

Have you ever journey for nine hours?
Sitting and standing, your head
So heavy, feeling completely dizzy
And your whole self overpowered your power?

haven't you traveled on the road for nine hours?
Where nothing you eat gives no strength
And the melody from your intestine disgusts?
Far away seventh heaven, you wonder a great length.

But journeying for nine hours is that
Experience you would never want to fantasise
About, the speed bumps, the pot holes hurt,
Your weakness, thought you've traveled the world
At large.

Traveled have I for nine hours before
My experience you wouldn't want to hear,
It has no end, the hope is a little liquor
The seventh heaven, my destination in no way near.

©ONAH DE GREAT
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