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RE: ADSactly Sci-Fi : Outer Earth Series 'The One Eyed Man (Part 6)'
Claire's inclusion puts more emotion into the story. Apparently it's a woman's gun to take. It is a character that surely comes to reinforce the intrigue and action. The game you play with the narration was great. The whole inner monologue from the image of the coffee is interesting and very well done. Apparently we have a great deal of adrenaline and action in store for us. Thanks for sharing, @zentalk
Absolutely. Writing a female character into the story is another challenge, one that will take more effort and also one I'm not sure I'll be able to do quite perfectly on my first attempt. I'm happy you liked the narration and how the coffee and backstory seemed to have some sort of connection. Yes! There will be a lot of action and adventure ahead... The introduction phase has been pretty much wrapped up so now its time for mystery, conflict and intrigue! Let the games begin! Thanks for reading and providing feedback @nancybriti!