THE PAINS OF LONELINESS (UNTALENTED-ADJUSTMENTS)

I once thought that writing a poetry is one hard job that needs countless sleepless night, also that it only needs people that are so so talented in it. But fortunately, thanks to

@surpassinggooggle
@deecown
@fessikay
@artsaddict
@chrisdsteemsport
#untalented-family
and mostly my Great family #STEEMITCITY,

This great people made me to understand that i also have something to offer in every aspect of life. So today i decided to share my first poetry originally written by me. hope you guys would love it. This how it goes !!

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So last night as i laid on my bed, remembering the sweet moments i shared with my lover, the amazing times we would sit down and gist happily with the feeling that everything is perfect. yo know the feeling am talking about. But lately it seems everything is turning to history, recently, she doesn't respond to my call, she doesn't reply my texts. A very deep and wide gap has been created between i and the source of my joy. So With tears in my eyes and with a broken heart i wrote this peom to reduce the pain my hearts feels.

THE PAINS OF LONELINESS

My heart bleeds

Filled with bad dreams, pains and regrets

i need the love of my heart

Can someone tell her am missing her,

Can the birds whisper to her ear that she worths more than a thousand rubies to me,

or has she forgotten so soon the who once made her heart leap for joy.

I MISS YOU HONEY

Pls. come back to me


Post credit: Originally written by me

Now you can see that am greatly adjusting to the platform, thanks again to you @surpassinggoogle for creating this opportunity for us to share.

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she doesn't respond to my call, she doesn't reply my texts. A very deep and wide gap has been created between i and the source of my joy. So With tears in my eyes and with a broken heart i wrote this peom to reduce the pain my hearts feels.

i know buddy how that really feels !!! its really painful heart breaking situation that love creates when you are missing someone so badly but she dont give a damn fuck ! believe me its with me ! she dont give a fuck even to my tears

am so sorry bro, i beleive its gonna better soon, lets try to be strong. i just decided to chase goals and not people, you can decide same too

I understand your feelings, i felt very sorry for you at moment and all those going through the same. Just that as @chiboyzz said i prefer to love with my eye open. Its a good feeling when you are in love, but the place where i come from, your wealth determines the amount of love you get so i out in a lot of my time on working smart so that i can earn decently then the girls will surely come. Keep steeming bro.

WOW THANKS SO MUCH BRO, I APPRECIATE THIS ADVICE

Better days are yet to come.Keep steeming and your success is limitless....cheers
#STEEMITCITY

Sorry about your loneliness and heartbreak...better days ahead..
👍👍

Love is a wonderful feeling. Good post. I have followed and upvoted you

nice attempt at poetry. for a start you didnt do badly. and oh yeah i can totally relate with your story. winks

Just take it easy u can get people much more better than her

Heartbroken, the feeling is pain but the end is gain.