Art Explained by a Writer: Assassination of General Venancio Flores (n.d.)

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Your life is over. That message was etched into my memory as I got up to start the day.
Grandmother always said that if you’re going out, you must be neatly dressed. You never know if you’ll have an accident or if death will strike. As a child, I’d just nodded. I’d never understood what she meant. Did it really matter what I was wearing at the moment I died?
I hesitated and decided, for the first time since my childhood, to do what my grandmother called ‘dressing neatly and decently’.
When I looked in the mirror in my Sunday best, as opposed to the general’s uniform with medals, it felt as though she was standing behind me, nodding approvingly.

It promised to be a sunny day. Sun is better than rain. Nobody wants to lie in the mud to die, I thought as I paused for a moment to take in the street. Would this be my last walk?

Barely 300 metres further on, I felt a tap on my shoulder and when I turned around, there stood a man grinning at me. I looked at him in surprise. No, I had no desire to ask or beg. That dream I’d had had told me that my final hour had struck today.
I felt a sharp stab and saw more men coming towards me. No cry came from my lips. Why should I defend myself? My life had been no different from anyone else’s. I felt the weariness of the past years slowly slip away from me. The shouting voices did nothing to me.
No, it wasn’t my whole life that flashed before my eyes as I felt the life ebbing from me, but the image of those two men standing with their backs to the violence, chatting happily about football, which had been etched into my memory.



Painting: Assassination of General Venancio Flores (n.d.) - public domain
Painter: Juan Manuel Blanes
5-5-2026
May 5th - Liberation Day in the Netherlands...well..
The contest Art & Writing is hosted by @solperez


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I've always said you're a top-notch writer. You write with complete ease and weave the story together like a well-oiled machine where every mechanism is essential. The greatest achievement of this story is that you leave behind a subtext, something that moves in the shadows, everything the reader must imagine and needs to recreate to understand the richness of this narrative. It's art with exquisite touches. @wakeupkitty

 11 days ago 

Two or even three stories in one are the best, don't you think so? There might be something to discover for every level of reader, the quick one, lazy one, the (deep thinker), the one who hates, fights wars and the common worker.
Thanks for finding the possibility to read me.
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As for clothes... I have a friend who always wears nice underwear just in case (what if you end up in the hospital, or something happens). It's strange, but there's a certain logic to it!

 11 days ago 

I wonder if they care in hospital about your brand new underwear ..if I get into hospital it's because I am most likely hit by a car, stabbed to death or something else life-threatening happened. If that is the case I am soaked in blood, sweat, vomit or whatsoever (head smashed with concrete or...).
Most likely they rip or cut the clothes from my body and if not... Scared or dying people pee their pant or shit in it. It is what the body does. I doubt the underwear will make any difference.
It's merely for oneself, to feel better, less shame I guess.
My grandmother always bought new underwear and nightdresses for every hospital visit. It must have cost her a fortune.
In the story the general knew he would die, so it might have felt to him that dying with dignity (well dressed) is better than dying drunk and poorly dressed out of depression and fear for being killed.

Your writing is impeccable from beginning to end. The narrator seems to have a premonition that something was going to happen to him that sunny day. Perhaps that's why he remembered his grandmother and her teachings about how he should dress, just in case death came unexpectedly. And while someone dies, the others continue with their normal lives, talking about soccer and worrying about the high cost of living.

It's always fascinating to read you. Hugs.

Impecable tu texto de principio a fin. El narrador parece presentir que ese día soleado algo iba a pasarle. Quizás por eso recordó a su abuela y sus enseñanzas sobre cómo debía ir vestido, por si acaso la muerte le llegaba de manera sorpresiva. Y mientras alguien muere, los demás siguen su vida normal, hablando de fútbol y preocupándose por el alto costo de la vida.

Siempre es fascinante leerte. Un abrazo.

 13 days ago 

Thanks for stopping by and your valuable comment. I wish you a super weekend!
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Un abrazo fuerte para ti.