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It is another story for the painting of Gustav Vermehren, it was a pleasure to write and please find my story
Every day for Anna is now going like the day before, there is no more happy moments and it looks like it is going in cycle. She wakes up in the morning, she does not want know if this is a blessing or curse, because she is now completely alone there is nobody left.
After breakfast she usually has her small breakfast and not because she is hungry but because she needs to eat for living. When she is at her window he likes to watch through the window and to see what is happening outside.
Once long ago she was also young and happy, she had her husband Alex and their son, who was loving son and they were proud of him. Once he married she moved with his family in America and had no time to visit the parents. He always wanted to take his parents but Anna and Alex both decided to stay where they are because they had friends and felt better there.
Not long ago Alex got ill and soon he died, for Anna it was like the life stopped and she lost an interest in anything. When her son asked his mother to join her to America but Anna reassured him and said that she prefers to stay there where he buried her husband.
Today Anna is sitting again at the window she is drying her dishes but in her thoughts he is in her memories. She never thought that it will be the time when she will be lonely and that it is so hard to survive day by day without loving people. She was almost torn between her old known place without any loving soul and her loving son with his family and grandchildren. She was thinking today too and decided that it is enough to be alone, she deserved some warmth and love of people who are there over the ocean. She will let her son know and will join him and finally will be able to spend time with his grandchildren.
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Hola, @wuddi. Has producido un relato cargado de una profunda transición psicológica, donde Ana, la anciana sentada al lado de la ventana, está lidiando con el fantasma del duelo estancado y su vida parece haberse detenido; le cuesta encontrar el asimut que la brújula humana y consciente le señala desde su corazón. No obstante, su mundo interior estático parece ser atraído por la fuerza de gravedad de la luz que se filtra por la ventana y después de su desayuno mira el mundo exterior que sigue avanzando.
El espacio bien distribuido y sus pocos objetos le mantienen un conflicto que se debate entre arraigo y afecto, su mente mantiene su identidad pasada, sus vivencias con el desaparecido Alex y el respeto a sus costumbres. Piensa que debe permanecer en ese lugar por absoluta lealtad a su amado.
El final no pudo haber sido mejor elaborado por ti, efectuaste un perfecto cierre narrativo con clímax emocional. La anciana en su profundo estado onírico a causa de la conmoción del duelo, comprende que quedarse recordando el pasado no es un destino permanente y menos a su edad. Por consiguiente, toma la mejor decisión, aceptar la calidez y amorosa compañía de su familia en el exterior.
Es un lujo de relato el que has compuesto, una pieza literaria muy valiosa. Te felicito. Éxito en tu participación.
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Thank you @yismar for your analysis, I like the way how you described the structure of my story. I think it is important to keep that in mind when writing stories and when someone would like to transmit the emotions and also to make reader to feel related to the feeling of heros.
Life is a wonderful gift that we receive only once and we should appreciate it and try to use everything the way that we do not regret later. Speak up, do not hold for us and just be ourselves. It is a real gift when people have relatives and families.
It was a pleasure to read your comment and thank you for visiting my post.
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Hermoso texto, @wuddi.
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Thank you @solperez for reading. Actually when I saw this painting, it reminded me an old women who I met few years ago and she was alone there, her family was in other country, she did not see them for many years and did not have contact, therefore, was hesitated to contact them saying that she is too old. I think in such situation just to be silent and think something for yourself is worth thing. If she would try to contact and see who knows she might have been successful. I always think about that when I see lonely old people.
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Pareciera que los seres humanos, a medida que vamos envejeciendo, hacemos un pacto con el silencio; y no queremos convertirnos en un "peso" para nadie. Tu texto es maravilloso.